Comic Book - Pg.1 and 2

Here is the two page story we had for our final assignments in Comic Book with Uko Smith. 3rd image is a full size sketch of the second page, I am not sure where my full size sketch is for page 1, but I had a great time working on both of these, I really pushed my self to not cheat, to not get sloppy and to work on a rendering technique, I don't think i will work like this way completely in the future, but we shall see. See if the story flows for you, if not that is my fail haha